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(no date) Dear X, I just wanted to thank you in selecting my company as your loan agent in helping you secure the financing needed for your refinance of your house. I will keep you informed to the progress of your loan application and to the market conditions regarding the terms of the loan itself. You may also call and ask the status of the loan at any time. If you have any questions please don't hesitate to call me direct. The telephone numbers listed below are designed to keep the owrry out of this transaction for both you and your family. In addition to offering mortgage loans I am both insurance and securities licensed too. At my company we offer a free financial plan and since you are applying for a home loan you or anyone in your family now qualify for a 10-, 15-, 20-, or 30-year term insurance policy for up to $250,000 with no medical, easy to qualify, no long forms and instant issue coverage. Just call me and ask for it! Remember our business is based on referrals -- Please don't keep us a secret. ******* Sincerely, |
(date) (name) Dear X, Thank you for selecting me as your loan agent. Not only will I keep you informed about the progress of your loan application, I will also alert you to changes in any market conditions that relate to the terms of your loan. Enclosed are two (2) sets of papers. One set is for your records; the other is for you to sign and date where indicated in yellow, then return to my office in the enclosed prepaid FedEx envelope. My direct phone numbers are listed below. Call me at any time if you have any questions. In case you didn’t know, I am a licensed insurance agent and securities broker in addition to being a loan broker. Call me for a free financial plan or to sign up you or anyone in your family for a 10-, 15-, 20- or 30-year term insurance policy of up to $250,000. Your home loan application qualifies you; there’s no medical exam or lengthy forms to complete — instant coverage. Just express your interest to me, and I'll take care of the rest. Our business is based on referrals — don’t keep us a secret! Sincerely, enclosures |